paranoidanders skrev:
Har du lagt in subliminala meddelanden? Så nått flasha förbi när Ron Paul pratade.

anti skrev:
I think I meant that there were too many long segments, like the last one with whatshisname [Tsarion].

The one with the journalist telling the Bush history should be put more in the beginning of the film, laying out how todays elite isn't much more different from the one 60-70 years ago. This is a GREAT clip from Martial Law right? Very good and bone hard facts.

anti skrev:
That is a great way to end it, but perhaps just edit it a little, to not make it too long? I almost fell asleep during that last bit..

Ps. Your editing is otherwise really good, very impressed..

Parsifal skrev:
I like it! Maybe the heavy metal shootout could be shortened. May be the text frames could be a bit longer?
What about clearifying our darkness. Maybe point out that this darkness potentially exists in everybody and that you have to choose your way. Some people choose thedark ego way and those who start off with lots of money and power turn into the caracters we can see in the film. This could be put in the beginning ormaybe before Alex's ego talk. Just an idea...

sale skrev:
Helt kass den var så dålig att jag inte vill/orkade se hela,Bad one.

Du sa du jobbade med design sedan 1995,,fortsätt med det du lär behöva det:)

addeblom skrev:
Great movie so far, i havent watched it all but i'll give you some hopefully constructive critisism anyways.

The words "killing children" below the intro title our darkness feels odd, i think you should remove it or atleast move it down some so it doesnt interfere with the title.


The picture at around 07.49 is abit hard to understand, maybe you can find another one?

The panned UN symbol at 08.53 is pretty annoying and takes focus of the text.

The song played at 10.29 should probably be tuned down afew decibel , or removed completely cause it's abit hard to hear what Alex is saying.

I think you should remove the hitler cross from the O in new world order at 11.08. Or you should explain that connection between the NWO and the swastika. I think it appears an odd referens to most people who aint deeply involved in this.

The henry kissinger talk at around 12.03 could be texted, the audio quality at that point isnt very good.

The "new world order" flashing text gets abit annoying after awhile :). Maybe it doesnt have to be full screen or you could put a smooth fade on it.

I've watched 17 minutes of it now and need to go unfortunately but i have to say you have done a really good job from what I have seen.

Hope you found my critisism constructive, good luck.

Al-CIAda skrev:
It's "pacified": (first minute of text)


Function:
transitive verb
Inflected Form(s):
pac·i·fied; pac·i·fy·ing
Etymology:
Middle English pacifien, from Anglo-French pacifier, from Latin pacificare, from pac-, pax peace
Date:
15th century

1 a: to allay the anger or agitation of : soothe <pacify a crying child> b: appease, propitiate
2 a: to restore to a tranquil state : settle <made an attempt to pacify the commotion>
b: to reduce to a submissive state : subdue <forces moved in to pacify the country>
— pac·i·fi·able Listen to the pronunciation of pacifiable \ˌpa-sə-ˈfī-ə-bəl\ adjective
synonyms pacify, appease, placate, mollify, propitiate, conciliate mean to ease the anger or disturbance of. pacify suggests a soothing or calming <pacified by a sincere apology>. appease implies quieting insistent demands by making concessions <appease their territorial ambitions>. placate suggests changing resentment or bitterness to goodwill <a move to placate local opposition>. mollify implies soothing hurt feelings or rising anger <a speech that mollified the demonstrators>. propitiate implies averting anger or malevolence especially of a superior being <propitiated his parents by dressing up>. conciliate suggests ending an estrangement by persuasion, concession, or settling of differences <conciliating the belligerent nations>.


Not: Passified, time to make a version 1.2